Thursday, April 16, 2020
High diving giraffes
during writing we have been doing writing i chose diving giraffes but i cant remember the others
this was sorta difficult to make but i would recommend it, it is definitely a worth of time.
I would rate it a 10\10 it was also super easy
if you have any feedback please share it.
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Hi Angelica
ReplyDeleteThis is interesting and very unusual. I don't think I have ever seen giraffes in the water before! You have captured the key information well. Next time with your post, remember to use capital letters. This will be an easy fix for you. make yourself a note whenever you post something. Stick it to your device and before you hit PST, check to see if you have used capital letters. Take care. Mrs Pascoe
Hi there Angelica
ReplyDeleteWouldn't it be funny to turn up at a pool and see a whole lot of giraffes practising their diving skills! How crazy would that be? Well done on the language you used to set the scene!
Hi Angelica, fantastic start to your writing. I would love it if you could add some more detail - EG what did the giraffes look like? What did the pool look like? What could you hear?
ReplyDeleteHi Angelica,Love your work here i also did something like this! I love this some of the big words you added! Maybe you could describe the giraffes like what they look like?
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