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Wednesday, April 15, 2020

My lockdown writing

During literacy we have been doing lock-down writing we had 3 options to chose out of pony, baseball cap,and a movie theatre, and a banana, i chose a pony, baseball cap, and a movie theatre i really liked this story it was really fun i would rate it a 10\10 it was really simple to do i would definitely do this again. If you have any feedback please be free to give i would really like to improve?
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 16, 2020 at 9:55 AM

    Hey Angelica,
    I am really excited to read your writing, can you please try and upload it again as it is not showing up at the moment.
    Thanks, Miss Smith

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  2. Ms CattonApril 17, 2020 at 10:17 AM

    Hi Angelica
    I love the start of your story but wasn't sure if it was finished or only some of it uploaded. I'd love to read it all!

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  3. Mr TysonApril 17, 2020 at 2:03 PM

    Hi Angelica
    Thanks for sharing your story. Love the background. You have chosen some interesting words for our story eg whilst, stumbled .
    Remember to carefully read through your work. Do you have fullstops and capitals in the right place?

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